{"id":6831,"date":"2018-08-13T12:56:27","date_gmt":"2018-08-13T18:56:27","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/sites.coloradocollege.edu\/careercenter\/?p=6831"},"modified":"2018-08-23T16:20:48","modified_gmt":"2018-08-23T22:20:48","slug":"the-cover-letter-formula-that-skyrocketed-my-interviews-from-0-to-55","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/sites.coloradocollege.edu\/careercenter\/the-cover-letter-formula-that-skyrocketed-my-interviews-from-0-to-55\/","title":{"rendered":"The Cover Letter Formula That Skyrocketed My Interviews From 0% to 55%"},"content":{"rendered":"<h3 class=\"article-title below\" style=\"text-align: center\"><strong>The Cover Letter Formula That Skyrocketed My Interviews From 0% to 55%<br \/>\n<a href=\"https:\/\/www.themuse.com\/advice\/the-cover-letter-formula-that-skyrocketed-my-interviews-from-0-to-55?utm_source=instagram&amp;utm_medium=organic_social&amp;utm_campaign=jobsearch_august2018&amp;utm_content=advice\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noopener\">Re-posted from The Muse<\/a> \/\/ By Lisa Siva<\/strong><\/h3>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center\"><em>Note from the Career Center: Remember, this is just one way to approach a cover letter! The most important thing is that you&#8217;re expressing interest and fit in the position, and that you tailor the letter for each and every position that you apply to.<\/em><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>When I first moved to New York, I was a\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.themuse.com\/advice\/31-attentiongrabbing-cover-letter-examples\">cover letter\u00a0<em>machine<\/em><\/a>. I wrote to every sir or madam with a job opening. I expressed my interest in positions for which I had none. I waxed rhapsodic about companies I\u2019d never heard of. My response rate? A whopping zero percent.<\/p>\n<p>Around the 10th unanswered application, the negative chatter started to kick in\u2014and it sounded suspiciously like Meryl Streep in\u00a0<em>The Devil Wears Prada<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p><em>Go home, Lisa<\/em>, said the small, icy voice in my head.\u00a0<em>You\u2019re just not cut out for this. Also, you have no sense of style<\/em>. At my lowest point, while surfing job boards at Starbucks, I actually locked myself in the bathroom and cried.<\/p>\n<p>Here\u2019s the good thing about rock bottom: Nothing is off-limits. I gave myself permission to try any and all tactics in the cover letter playbook, from throwing in a Beyonc\u00e9 GIF to pretending the hiring manager and I were good friends. Finally, 103 cover letters later, I landed on one that worked.<\/p>\n<p>Within an hour, I had an interview request waiting in my inbox\u2014and then another, and another. Soon, my response rate skyrocketed from 0 to 55%, and I was scheduling interviews with\u00a0<em>Vogue<\/em>,\u00a0<em>InStyle<\/em>, and\u00a0<em>Rolling Stone<\/em>\u00a0into my calendar. In other words, this letter\u2014fueled by an old copywriting framework called problem-agitate-solve\u2014is powerful stuff.<\/p>\n<p>Here\u2019s how this three-part formula (a.k.a., my secret sauce) works&#8230;<\/p>\n<h2>1. Identify the Problem<\/h2>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/www.themuse.com\/advice\/55-of-hiring-managers-dont-read-cover-lettersheres-how-to-get-their-attention\">55% of hiring managers don\u2019t read cover letters<\/a>. Why should they, when we write like modern-day Oliver Twists, begging them to please, sir, give us the job?<\/p>\n<p>News flash: The hiring manager isn\u2019t here to make your dreams come true. They\u2019re in it for\u00a0<em>themselves<\/em>. OK, that\u2019s harsh, but the truth is that they\u2019re looking for an awesome candidate to come in and do a kick-ass job that\u2019ll help them run their department (or company) more efficiently and successfully. That\u2019s why, when a friend tipped me off to an opening at the fashion magazine I\u2019d read religiously since middle school, I resisted the urge to gush\u2014and opened with this one-liner instead:<\/p>\n<p><em>\u201cAs a veteran of Details.com and Vs. Magazine, I\u2019ve seen how crazy fashion month can get.\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<p>This sentence, though just 16 words long, tells the hiring manager two things: I understand the problem you\u2019re trying to solve, and I\u2019ve been there. The trick? Zeroing in on the right problem\u2014because it\u2019s almost never spelled out for you in the job description.<\/p>\n<p>When you\u2019re writing your own cover letter, start with the list of responsibilities and ask yourself,\u00a0<em>Why? Why is this task important to this company?<\/em>\u00a0Keep digging until you can\u2019t go any further. The true need is usually the one at the end of a chain of whys.<\/p>\n<h2>2. Agitate the Problem<\/h2>\n<p>Now that you\u2019ve identified the problem, here comes the fun part.<\/p>\n<p>Because no hiring manager has ever said, \u201cI just\u00a0<em>love<\/em>\u00a0paying employees thousands of dollars every year!\u201d your challenge now is to remind him or her how painful the problem is, and by default, how valuable a solution could be. Don\u2019t be afraid to twist the knife a bit, like I did in my second paragraph:<\/p>\n<p><em>If you\u2019re looking for someone who can not only keep up, but also deliver that SEO-friendly, 75-page street style slideshow five minutes ago\u2026<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Notice I didn\u2019t say, \u201cIf you\u2019re looking for someone who can turn around projects quickly\u2026\u201d I was specific, and I made sure to use an example I knew would resonate with a stressed-out web editor.<\/p>\n<p>And if you\u2019re new to the industry or the role? Just ask. This is\u00a0<em>exactly<\/em>\u00a0what\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.themuse.com\/advice\/5-tips-for-nonawkward-informational-interviews\">informational interviews are for<\/a>. Find someone on the team you\u2019re applying to, let your interviewer do most of the talking, and pay close attention to\u00a0<em>how<\/em>\u00a0he or she discusses the company\u2019s challenges.<\/p>\n<p>In conversation, we instinctively trust people who\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.themuse.com\/advice\/5-body-language-basics-that-make-you-appear-100-more-trustworthy-to-strangers\">mirror our body language<\/a>. On your application, you won\u2019t get the chance\u2014but you can do the next best thing: Pick up on your interviewer\u2019s subtle cues and phrases and then mirror their speaking language in your cover letter.<\/p>\n<h2>3. Offer the Solution<\/h2>\n<p>By this point, you\u2019ve got the hiring manager squirming at the table. Now, deliver the solution. Hint: It\u2019s you.<\/p>\n<p>Think about what makes you incredibly qualified to solve the problem. In my case, I knew I wanted the hiring manager to think of me and say, \u201cLisa? Oh, she\u2019s the one who knows our backend systems and seems like a real go-getter.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Here\u2019s how I made it happen:<\/p>\n<p><em>\u201cSince TeamSite and I are old friends, I\u2019ll be able to hit the ground running\u2014and whether it\u2019s churning out a dozen blog posts per day or refreshing the homepage with breaking fashion month news, I\u2019ve done it all. Most importantly, you\u2019ll never hear me say, \u201cThat\u2019s not my job!\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<h2>4. Close With Confidence<\/h2>\n<p>After all that work, you aren\u2019t going to dash off a breathless \u201cHope to hear from you soon!\u201d right? Instead, seal the deal with a sentence that displays confidence, competence, and a genuine interest in the company:<\/p>\n<p><em>\u201cI&#8217;d love to learn more about your production needs and how I can help!\u201d<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Boom. That\u2019s it.<\/p>\n<p>Like its contrarian sibling,\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/www.themuse.com\/advice\/the-pain-letter-the-best-way-to-write-a-cover-letter-that-gets-results\">the pain letter<\/a>, this cover letter takes some guts to send. I get it\u2014the first time I fired it off, I was so terrified my boyfriend had to hit the enter button for me.<\/p>\n<p>Look at it this way, though: Everyone else will compete on how many buzzwords they can stuff in a sentence. They\u2019ll swear up and down how passionate they are and how hard they work. But you? With this cover letter formula, you\u2019ve already proved it.<\/p>\n<p>You, my friend, play a different game.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>The Cover Letter Formula That Skyrocketed My Interviews From 0% to 55% Re-posted from The Muse \/\/ By Lisa Siva &nbsp; Note from the Career Center: Remember, this is just one way to approach a cover letter! 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